Where were your shoes? Write about an interesting time when you happened to be barefoot. Begin and end your writing with a description of your feet.
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I use my feet a lot. I use them playing baskestball. I use them to walk. They are very helpful to me. That is what i use my feet for most of the time.
my feet are soft. They got toe nails on them. i got ten toes. They are very cool. That is what my toes look like.
Charlie
My feet are size 9 adult size. This is one time i had to go to school with my dad's slippers. It was a normal day except i cant find my shoes. I looked every where but i can't find it. I checked me bed, I asked my dad, I even had my dog sniff every where to find it.
Then i got the idea of going to school with slippers. Then my dad said that would be ridiculous so i checked the house again now I was 30 minutes late. I gave up but my dad gave me a lot of encouragement so i looked in the garage the n my dad went with my idea so i went to school with slippers. My feet are size 9 adult, rough and dry. From Zhaohao
This is the time I was bare foot. It all started at the shower. My mom and sisters left and I didn't even know. I was alone at the house. I got out of the shower and changed but I couldn't find my shoes. Then i saw all my clolthes and they were all wet! I was at home bare-footed and I didn't know were everybody was!
Then my mom came and explained why she left. It was because she needed groceries. My mom said she would dry all my shoes of in one hour. My mom dried my shoes. Everything turned out pretty good.
This is the time I was bare foot. It all started at the shower. My mom and sisters left and I didn't even know. I was alone at the house. I got out of the shower and changed but I couldn't find my shoes. Then i saw all my clolthes and they were all wet! I was at home bare-footed and I didn't know were everybody was!
Then my mom came and explained why she left. It was because she needed groceries. My mom said she would dry all my shoes of in one hour. My mom dried my shoes. Everything turned out pretty good.
Roberto sorry I forgot to put my name on the other one.
There was a time when I had a dream that I was barefoot. I was on my way to school and in the car I had realized that I had no shoes on! I figured not to tell my dad, but I wanted it to be just a dream. So, in my dream I tried so hard to wake up by pinching myself!
I woke up when I was just about to enter our school. I don't know how, but I knew it was a dream in my dream. I would never, ever forget to wear my shoes before I leave to go somewhere, unless it's my swimming pool. I can't remember much from it though. Just that I didn't enter the school yet. That was my dream of me being barefoot.
(Macy)
My feet are tan and have toes? I also have toenails. They come in handy when I walk. They also can stink! I hate it when I trip on them!
I can't think of anything else but I can say I like my feet. And my feet arre helpful when I run. Right now my feet are at the computer lab. Thats about my feet! KATHRYN
One time I was bear footed while playing bebeguns. I had steped on a nail it really herted.I was looking for my shoes but I coudn't find them. looked in the livingroom and all over my house. I looked down at my feet they looked like a little bloody mess.
my mom said where are your shoes. I said I don't know. So I looked in her room and they where on the floor. I said there they are and I cleaned my feet and I was good to go back outside the end
My foot is a seven in a hafe. My feet was use to go siwming . I run with my feet. By Malik
This is the time I was bare foot. It all started at the shower. My mom and sisters left and I didn't even know. I was alone at the house. I got out of the shower and changed but I couldn't find my shoes. Then i saw all my clolthes and they were all wet! I was at home bare-footed and I didn't know were everybody was!
Then my mom came and explained why she left. It was because she needed groceries. My mom said she would dry all my shoes of in one hour. My mom dried my shoes. Everything turned out pretty good. Charlie
I use my feet for playing basketball and walking around the house barefoot. My feet are brown and light brown. when i go swimmng i use my feet to go kick my feet to go faster. My brother is always trying to step on my toes when im barefot in the house. That is my discription of my feet. Roye
One time I was bear footed while playing bebeguns. I had steped on a nail it really herted.I was looking for my shoes but I coudn't find them. looked in the livingroom and all over my house. I looked down at my feet they looked like a little bloody mess.
my mom said where are your shoes. I said I don't know. So I looked in her room and they where on the floor. I said there they are and I cleaned my feet and I was good to go back outside the end. By Stefon
The last time I was barefoot was yesterday. I was at home. I went to go check the mail. I couldn't find my shoes. So my dad told me to just go out like that
My toes are pink. Also my toes have 10 toe nailes.
By Elena
By David
One day my family and I were at the beach. My sisters and I were playing in the waves. Suddenly Kathryn yelled",OUR FLIP FLOPS!"
Hi my name is Caitlin. My feet look like normal kid feet, five toes, skin, now you now what they look like. A time when I was barefoot was when I was walking home from home.It was dark and it was raining.
We were hunting for artifactsat at a field trip. I steped on a rock, so that told me that I didn't have any shoes on. I am riding the bus home now with now shoes on. I'm home now and I got my shoes and socks. Now all I need to worry about is how to get back to my class.
When I was barefoot my feet were drty. Your feet turn black if you walk in the street barefoot. I got an cold because I walked barefooted in the house and outside to feed my dogs. My size of my foot is six in the half. My feet have been tired from football pratice because all we did was run and we ran for two hours.
When I went swimming I kick my feet so I can swim fast. My feet was hurting so bad during my football game. When my friends and I was wrestling one of them hurted my foot. It was a neddle in my foot and it hurted when I took it out. I twisted my foot at home because my brother kept on messing with me. Devin
Congratulations! You have posted your first journal entry! Now I want you to look at the editing rules post and edit your journal entry. Then copy and paste 1 other entry from someone elses post with your editing remarks. Example: "I use my feet a lot. I use them playing baskestball. I use them to walk. They are very helpful to me. That is what i use my feet for most of the time." Capitalize "I". Combine your first three sentences into one comlex sentence!
Zhahoa you forgot to indent.
Roberto
I use my feet for playing basketball and walking around the house barefoot. My feet are brown and light brown. when i go swimmng i use my feet tot go faster. My brother is always trying to step on my toes when im barefot in the house. That is my discription of my feet. Royle
My Feet have toes and nails on them. Most of the time I really like being without any shoes on but even if my mom gets mad i still don't put on my shoes.
abby
After copying, go back. Then go to editing guidlines. past it there.
Elena you forgot a period in one of your sentences. From Devin
To David
You need 5 more sentense.......
Zhaohao you forgot to capilatize I in the first paragraph by jessica
To David
You need 5 more sentense.......
Malik, you don't spell half like that!
Abby
Charlie, capitalize the M in the second paragraph.
Nadia
Good Job Royle!
You only misted the word "foot"
From,Mercedez
Charlie, capitalize the M in the second paragraph.
By David
One day my family and I were at the beach. My sisters and I were playing in the waves. Suddenly Kathryn yelled",OUR FLIP FLOPS!" I spun around and saw our flip flops floating away! We quickly ran across the shore to our flip flops and grabbed them. Caitlin lost one.
CAITLIN! YOU FERGOT TO USE A COMMA!
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