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This is the time I was bare foot. It all started at the shower. My mom and sisters left and I didn't even know. I was alone at the house. I got out of the shower and changed but I couldn't find my shoes. Then i saw all my clolthes and they were all wet! I was at home bare-footed and I didn't know were everybody was!
Then my mom came and explained why she left. It was because she needed groceries. My mom said she would dry all my shoes of in one hour. My mom dried my shoes. Everything turned out pretty good
Roberto
My feet are size 9 adult size. This is one time I had to go to school with my dad's slippers. It was a normal day except i cant find my shoes. I looked every where but I can't find it. I checked me bed, I asked my dad, I even had my dog sniff every where to find it.
Then I got the idea of going to school with slippers. Then my dad said that would be ridiculous so I checked the house again now I was 30 minutes late. I gave up but my dad gave me a lot of encouragement so i looked in the garage the n my dad went with my idea so i went to school with slippers. My feet are size 9 adult. From Zhaohao
One time I was bear footed while playing bebeguns. I had steped on a nail it really herted.I was looking for my shoes but I coudn't find them. looked in the livingroom and all over my house. I looked down at my feet they looked like a little bloody mess.
my mom said where are your shoes. I said I don't know. So I looked in her room and they where on the floor. I said there they are and I cleaned my feet and I was good to go back outside.THE END By Stefon
The last time I was barefoot was yesterday. I was at home. I went to go check the mail. I couldn't find my shoes. So my dad told me to just go out like that
My toes are pink. Also my toes have 10 toe nailes. I have never liked my toes. I don't know why I just don't. Maybe one day I will.
By Elena Marisol Martinez
My feet are tan and have toes? I also have toenails. They come in handy when I walk. They also can stink! I hate it when I trip on them!
I can't think of anything else but I can say I like my feet. And my feet arre helpful when I run. Right now my feet are at the computer lab. Thats about my feet! KATHRYN
Roberto, you forgot to capitalize your letter "I".
OSCAR
There was a time when I had a dream that I was barefoot. I was on my way to school and in the car I had realized that I had no shoes on! I figured not to tell my dad, but I wanted it to be just a dream. So, in my dream I tried so hard to wake up by pinching myself!
I woke up when I was just about to enter our school. I don't know how, but I knew it was a dream in my dream. I would never, ever forget to wear my shoes before I leave to go somewhere, unless it's my swimming pool. I can't remember much from it though. Just that I didn't enter the school yet. That was my dream of me being barefoot.
(Macy)
Kathryn you are not supposed to put a question mark on "My feet are tan and have toes?" use a period
Hi my name is Caitlin. My feet look like normal kid feet, five toes, skin, now you now what they look like. A time when I was barefoot was when I was walking home from school.It was dark was raining.
We were looking for artifactsat at a field trip. I steped on a rock, so that told me that I didn't have any shoes on. I am riding the bus home now with no shoes on. I'm home and I got my shoes and socks. Now all I need to worry about is how to get back to my class!
Stefon
You foregot to capital the M in the first sentence in the 2nd paragraph.
Elena
Kathryn, you misspelled the word "are"
OSCAR
Royle you forgot to capalize your I OK IT NEED'S TO BE CAPALIZE
When I was barefootedWhen I was barefoot my feet were drty. Your feet turn black if you walk in the street barefoot. I got an cold because I walked barefooted in the house and outside to feed my dogs. My size of my foot is six in the half. My feet have been tired from football pratice because all we did was run and we ran for two hours.
When I went swimming I kick my feet so I can swim fast. My feet was hurting so bad during my football game. When my friends and I was wrestling one of them hurted my foot. It was a neddle in my foot and it hurted when I took it out. I twisted my foot at home because my brother kept on messing with me. Devin my feet were drty. Your feet turn black if you walk in the street barefoot. I was sick because I walked barefooted in the house and outside to feed my dogs. The size of my foot is six in a half. My feet have been tired from football pratice because all we did was run and we ran for two hours.
When I went swimming I kick my feet so I can swim fast. My feet was hurting so bad during my football game. When my friends and I was wrestling one of them hurted my foot. It was a neddle in my foot and it hurted when I took it out. I twisted my foot at home because my brother kept on messing with me. Devin
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